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With Wine |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WITH WINE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If I were to write a poem, it would be about you, romantic it would be, about things that you do… Perhaps my pen would say, how lovely you look tonight, strikingly beautiful, in the soft moonlight… Or it’d be about dinner with wine, a full bouquet like your lips, I’d make it the color of red, and we’d take little sips… Then we’d dance on the patio, in the evening under stars, whispering words of passion, listening to soft guitars… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...and lets not forget the guitars...  Lovely write here Bill...soft and romantic. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and you can conduct your own private concert before her and strum her heartstrings like Stevie Ray Vaughn! (big hugggssssss) This is so romantic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, A beautiful love poem you certainly can write. Thanks, dear Sir, for sharing with us your heart. Love To All, Ethel |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
This is beautiful Bill, and this stanza Or it’d be about dinner with wine, a full bouquet like your lips, I’d make it the color of red, and we’d take little sips… was my favorite. caterina |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One of these days....I am gonna buy a guitar. Don't ask me what I am gonna do with it... Maybe I can fool them into thinking I can play the silly thing.. NOT! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Well gee, I'm swept away now. Very nicely done Bill, with such a soft touch. Lovely. |
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