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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-30 02:11 PM


Sharpen steel,
Dragging slowly cross grind stone,
Till the feel
Will skin peel,
Slipping quick down to the bone.
Flashing steel
Slashing steel
Beauty in a moving knife,
Slicing flesh
Then at rest
Casually removing life
In fillet
Captured freshly from the bay.

Gloom


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-10-30 02:15 PM



Now I'm hungry...

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

2 posted 2002-10-30 03:47 PM


For a moment there you had me worried pal!
Thank God it only turned out to be a fish!

Enjoyed!

God bless!

Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 2002-10-30 04:01 PM


I don't always appreciate a trick top hat ill make this exception grudgingly

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

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