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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Trying.... all the time trying to do the best while sometimes feeling like I'm doing it right, but then wondering why it seems that it's never good enough. Trying.... to understand those things which seem there is no meaning behind them, they are unjustified and they are out of my grasp, but still they exist and still I try... to understand. And I look for the words to explain it but they are not found, there is no dictionary that holds the words which hide those things that choose not to show their true intend to me but to make me search. I seek to learn.... Through endless miles of thoughts I journey sometimes not understanding, life leaving me wondering why it remains at times so very complicated but still there is something inside that whispers to me quietly........ Keep trying...... If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, I suppose this is an aspect of the human experience. I, like you, just keep on trying! But as I have grown in awareness, I find that yes, I keep on trying, but it is more to please myself than others. You conveyed your feelings very well---and I think you're wonderful!!! ~ Great big HUGS to you, sweet gentle one! ~ Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know that feeling Donna..and on these cold rainy days, the thoughts run on and on... hugss M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda hugs back. Thank you.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You snuck in on me M. Thanks. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deep thoughts placed upon the page today Donna. Yes...all we can do is to keep trying... even when we question ourselves as to whether or not it is our best. Enjoyed the read sweetie. Be well. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is an insightful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great write enjoyed Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, as always, you have written a very good work. All we can do is try, even when we don't quite understand. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Donna, this is sooooooo wonderful, sweet friend, yes, follow your heart as I know you can achieve anything if you try, even if you fail the first few times around you are destined to succeed! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Searching is one of the best things in life...to question is to care. Enjoyed the deep pondering in this piece.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice work! makes me feel a little positive today |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Since a Gentle Spirit is trying, I will too. Thank you. etoodog |
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