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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-10-30 10:47 AM

Magenta hues once
submerged midnite blues,
as fireflies sparkled
in starlight's dust.
Ebony surrounded us
while crickets echoed
our heartbeat dreams
in surround sound
upon the still night air.

But you were never really here
except in my dreams,
to share your cascading rhythms,
your passionate Ziljian pearls,
Love's heartbeat.
Our splendid harmony
has become cacophony,
and I am once again submerged,
in midnite blues.

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

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1 posted 2002-10-30 10:49 AM

And can't be saved by daylight savings or a move from the long nights of Alaska.....I feel the want of this.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-30 11:00 AM

"Our splendid harmony
has become cacophony,
and I am once again submerged,
in midnite blues."

I feel this in the pit of my stomach.

EA

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-30 03:03 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, my heart goes out to you, I hope all is alright now and I wish for the blues to turn to yellows soon for you! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2002-10-31 01:23 AM

Richard, thank you for taking time to read, and reply, but mostly, understand.

EA, If you felt this way when you read this, then you understood the emotions and the feelings. Thank you.

Noah, I am OK, and since friendship is the basis of all good long term relationships, I am happy to say my friendship is intact. There really is no conflict, but the poetry of Love sometimes exaggerates the reality. Does that make sense?

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-10-31 01:21 PM

MidniteSun~
This is simply a beautifully written piece of your heart~
Longingly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2002-10-31 07:32 PM

Thanks for your warm hug, Marge.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-11-01 11:47 AM

Magenta hues once
submerged midnite blues,
as fireflies sparkled
in starlight's dust.
Ebony surrounded us
=================================
But you were never really here
except in my dreams,
to share your cascading rhythms,
your passionate Ziljian pearls,
Love's heartbeat.
=========================
and I am once again submerged,
in midnite blues.
===========================
Kacy I love the imagery in this...
its touch of haunting and bluesy feel makes it even more impressive...
You write the night and do your pen name justice

very cool write Poetess Midnite

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

Midnitesun

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Gaia

8 posted 2002-11-01 11:52 AM

JM! thanks for reading, and for your generous reply.

Moths are so tasty.

(there is a poem in this, I'm working on it now)

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