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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-30 07:47 AM


“ROCKING SWEETHEART”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If you fell into my arms, and I held you tight,
I would touch you softly, tenderly, into bliss,
then I would hold you closer, kiss your lips,
show you through the night what you’ve missed.

I would make mad passionate love to you,
until you thought you were on Mars…
I really mean something special like not before,
happening in that delicious bed upstairs,
you know, the one that’s ours…

I promise I would totally wear you out,
until you looked all frizzled and glub,
and you screamed, ‘no more dear’…
Oh yes, have I special treats for you,
my wonderful love!

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe,
your rocking sweetheart, that’s me,
rolling on the floor and giggling with glee,
enough is enough, but when is enough,
really enough…

“Ohhhhh my sweet honey buuunnnyyyy,
yoo-hoo, please don’t you flee,
it’s just your sweetheart,
your little lover,
ME!!”
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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1 posted 2002-10-30 09:42 AM


some people are such dreamers


LOL


very playful, Bill

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Toerag
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2 posted 2002-10-30 09:46 AM


Yanno Bill?...B.B. King talks to Lucille that way?....LOL....cute write..
garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-30 09:46 AM


Sweet Bill,
This is really
cute. Sounded like
you were singing. HeeHee!!
I enjoyed this. Thanks for
sharing.
Love to All,
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-10-30 09:57 AM


Woooowwww!
TD

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-30 10:37 AM


If this was written to scare me off, well you failed miserably! tehe

EA

scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2002-10-30 10:58 AM


Bill...this is a fun read...I really enjoyed the sense of fun and adventure expressed in the words...playful is the word that keeps popping up in my mind...

...believe what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (10-30-2002 02:00 PM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-10-30 01:02 PM


Ooooh Myyyyy!!!

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-10-30 01:13 PM


What a WONDERFUL read I really enjoy you...


Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-10-30 01:48 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and cute, sweet friend, this is sure to melt your loves heart and this will sing to her almost like some Ray Charles ballad! (big hugggsssss) nThis is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
10 posted 2002-10-30 07:41 PM


Oh my goodness gracious!
I hardly know how to respond to this rocking romance poem.
I think I'd better slip away quietly......



WhiteRose
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11 posted 2002-10-30 07:47 PM


Well this is just darling. Enjoyed! It's a happy little read and I needed that just now. Thank you.
Martie
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12 posted 2002-10-30 10:47 PM


Bill

There is nothing better then love and laughter...unless it's more love and laughter.  

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