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Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!

0 posted 2002-10-30 07:03 AM


No One Else CoMeS CLoSe....



In so many days...
And in so many ways...
I've opened my heart to you...
As a pathway to my soul.

I can still recall...
The first time our skin touched
-Just our hands-
That anxiousness
That made my palms wet
And tingle with excitement.

I can still reminisce....
The first time our lips...
Slightly touched...
So soft and seductive...
My heart was racing.

Only fate and time will tell...
When YOU will explore and learn
Ways of how I love...
And how you want me to love.



~ Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!~

[This message has been edited by Kristine (10-30-2002 07:47 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kristine - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2002-10-30 07:44 AM


Welcome!!!!

enjoyed

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2002-10-30 08:06 AM


The learning phase is perhaps the most exciting phase of love... and once learnt, the lessons serve well... enjoy your time... and welcome to passion...

regards,
sudhir

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-10-30 08:24 AM


Hi Kristine..welcome to PIP...I'm Toerag..one of the quiet subdued type guys here and I sure like your poetry....good job.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-10-30 08:51 AM



Kristine, Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-10-30 08:59 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS KRISTINE!
Very lovely first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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6 posted 2002-10-30 09:09 AM


Kristine,
WELCOME   TO   PASSIONS  IN  POETRY
I hope you like it here.
I love your poem, and hope to read much more.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Love To All,
Ethel  

regards2you
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7 posted 2002-10-30 09:14 AM


~WELCOME~ Enjoyed your first post.
Look forward to seeing more.


Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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8 posted 2002-10-30 10:18 AM


Very well done, Kristine. Welcome to Passions. Hope your 'One' comes in for a closer look into your warm soul.
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-10-30 01:10 PM


Hi, Kristine! Welcome aboard! Thank you for sharing this tender poem of love. I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

~ smiles to you this fine fall day (at least it is here in southern Ontario!

Earth Angel

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10 posted 2002-10-30 01:36 PM




(sigh) Oh Kristine, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I wish this true love to always fill your heart with delight and to be like that first day forever and ever with magic, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kristen, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristine, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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11 posted 2002-10-30 02:49 PM


There seems to be such a sweet sense of innocent wonder about this writing. I know it comes from your heart. Thank you.

etoodog

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12 posted 2002-10-30 03:36 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry...I found myself wondering...hoping...that I left my love feeling the same things after we met...kissed...and fell in love

...believe what your heart feels...

Suetang
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13 posted 2002-10-30 04:05 PM


Hello Kristine

Welcome to Passions, a place of warmth, comfort and inspiration.  I very much enjoyed reading your words of love and will look forward to reading more.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Walter Poe
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14 posted 2002-10-30 04:09 PM


A welcome from a true ghost
to a bueatiful spirit

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

The Lonely Stranger
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15 posted 2002-10-30 04:11 PM




  "I've opened my heart to you...
   As a pathway to my soul."

I especially love these lines. a very well concieved description of your angst, mixed with love & lust.


... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent.

[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (10-30-2002 04:14 PM).]

vandana
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16 posted 2002-10-30 06:36 PM


welcome!!!!!!!!enjoyed this!!!!!!
Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
17 posted 2002-10-31 08:09 AM


Oh, my heartfelt thanks to all of you !!!
your response means so much to me


Kristine


[This message has been edited by Kristine (11-02-2002 05:44 AM).]

passing shadows
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18 posted 2002-12-27 02:11 AM


beautiful!
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