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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am angry at chaos confetti of reality within a glass booth recklessly taunting me, a comanche: oh, just try to grab and hold a grip of paper strip which offers you the fealty of the sustenance of touch. I am hungry for the peace confetti of reality lying there awaiting sweep-- the war cry screams: "comancheeeeee!" [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-30-2002 06:03 AM).] |
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cateash New Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 6 |
This is so cool! It rocks, it's fierce and strange and REALLY gets you in because of how creative it is. I can imagine this being a really great performance poetry piece. Hope you post more stuff. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
LOL, Hope you don't have a hachet! Everyone duck  |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Ever see the picture titled "Comanche" It was one of my favorites when i was a kid. Cool poem! That's how we should approach life's difficulties--like a Comanche! Hiyaaaaaaaaaah! Enjoyed! God bless! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Raging celebration, or raging at celebration? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved the entire concept of this Karen.......smiles.......I love the way YOUR mind works. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
More than that, my girl more than that... it screams permanence... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karen, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, it feels like all these intangible concepts we believe in are like waves of the ocean that rock in the wind and never can we get them to stay still for the sake of peace and silence! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, so let's keep bailing out, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There's a story behind this--it involves way too many delicacies to be told here however-- just me...both bemoaning and celebrating a bit of comanche blood that comes roaring out now and again. with a little wink to those who KNOW... and thanks again--(mikey, you startle me bringing these back up..egads I've been writing alot lately...) I actually FORGET them...*shaking my head at me* with a curtsey and  to forum! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity~ Ironic that someone called 'serenity' should write a poem such as this..lol.  I REALLY love this, my friend. Loving that Comanche spirit. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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