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Wind
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0 posted 2002-10-29 09:08 PM


If the stars stopped shineing,
Would there truely be no light?
I think that if the stars stopped shineig,
That I would go and take their place
In the sky.

But that would be a long time from now,
But if you ever have a need,
I will be your light
So you can see the way.
And I will leave the rest up to the stars

~Wind~

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-10-29 09:44 PM


Beautiful, heartfelt words.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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2 posted 2002-10-29 09:45 PM


You have lite the way
enjoyed

Bernie




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3 posted 2002-10-29 11:26 PM




(sigh) Oh Liz, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may we and your friends always be that guiding light of faith in you and may you do the rest and follow your destiny and heart! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-29 11:40 PM


A very sweet sentiment, Liz...
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-10-30 12:27 PM


This is really a sweet poem, Liz. Thanks for sharing with us.

Love and hugs,
Ethel

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