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In Bonded Kiss
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In Bonded Kiss |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There is a message in your kiss a taste of fire in your eyes as part of me I lose in you and destiny will feed my sighs of winding on this lonely road to chance upon affections feel. I'm doused in you in bonded kiss and tempted by your soul of real. I ache from sounds of colored love, a rainbow streaks my every day. I'm here alone but in your hold, in fantasy, my words to play to stretch my waking, hours more between us now, the Autumn air. I'm doused in you in bonded kiss and tempted by the scent you wear. You've touched my heart, in tattooed love when weakness overtakes my strong in matters of the heart, I dwell, no fear have I, for you I long to share the moments, on my mind, escape my past to freedoms shore. I'm doused in you in bonded kiss and in your hold for evermore. There is no doubting 'bout the spell unleashing feelings once were hid, in whispered voice, I tread your thoughts and dream the dreams, to not forbid the you of us, in darkness reigns the me of myst, that fogs this rite. I'm doused in you in bonded kiss and promised yours, my heart tonight. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-29-2002 08:56 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your writing lovely, as you do... BC |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great, very good.. "as part of me I lose in you" yes i like the whole write but this keeps sticking in my mind Bernie oh by the way the first couple lines have a lot to say also. "There is a message in your kiss a taste of fire in your eyes"  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (10-29-2002 09:20 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart I really love this, you are so remarkable perceptive that you of course know this. Absolutely exquisite writing and it is simply divine. The touch of your words fluttering within the spirit of this, rise from the page to dance in lyrical wonder into the very stuff of my soul. I truly am breathless with delight, truly you write with starlight. You really are an amazing poet, this is breathtakingly lovely   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, I hope this is true love for you and I wish for your heart to forever be kissed by the beauty of courtship! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen~ This is so wonderful. Words to keep thats for sure...Paul |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I love this. You write such beautiful poetry. Love To All, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just lovely...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC...thank you Bernie..don't you think the lips send a message?  Marsha...you are such a good friend hugss and thanks Always M Noah...kissing is wonderful...thanks Paul, I am glad you enjoyed these words that I often feel. Thank you Ethel... you are so very kind,Thank you for your attention to my poetry. Julie and Michael, I appreciate your stopping by to read and comment..thanks M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterBlissGal~ I LOVE this ! Good to see you sweetie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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