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Tim
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0 posted 2002-10-29 06:56 PM


I nominatived my predicate,
got lost in conjugation,
Linguistic denotations
in syntactic exploitation,
Have you seen my amphiboly
embedded in a kernel?
I do not care an anaphor,
associatively infernal.
Parse the salt and pepper please,
condimental equivocations,
Intransitively intransigent,
cemented connotations,
Exhaustlessness redundancy,
redacting passive voice,
Euphamistically, it's adios,
in adverbial rejoice.

[This message has been edited by Tim (10-29-2002 09:48 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-10-29 10:50 PM


Tim darling man this is exquisite writing, you’ve written something very very special here


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-10-30 08:24 PM


Parse the salt and pepper please,




and nay not adios, mehopes.

Clever, clever write...
and I admit, that I understood only MOST...
sigh...but I swear I used to be able to parse
with the best of them.

Enjoyed Tim.

Denise
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3 posted 2002-10-30 09:08 PM


Very clever piece of writing, Tim! And most entertaining! Enjoyed, as always!
vandana
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4 posted 2002-10-30 09:08 PM


enjoy
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-30 09:15 PM


What a clever write this is!
Much enjoyed!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2002-12-26 02:28 AM


uh huh....
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