navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » ALL HALLOWS MIGHT
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic ALL HALLOWS MIGHT Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
HollyDazed
New Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 6


0 posted 2002-10-29 06:16 PM


ALL HALLOWS MIGHT


A tale of terror ...I tell tonight
Under the glow of full moonlight
Beware of what the shadows hold,
Lest you think you're very bold

Remember this, I told you so,
If you end up there...down below.
Watch very close, all about, this eve
Some is real, some make-believe

Witches, goblins, ghosts and more,
Demons, devils, ghouls galore
Vampires, bats, and famished rats,
And don't forget those evil black cats.

Cauldrons, spells and eye of newt
Door to door they come in suit
Beware the wolf, beware the beast
Beware the hunger, they're after feast

Upon you, wishes... they, would dine
They want yours now, to make you thine
Into your soul, they creepy crawl
Along the way, they've scavenged all

Your blood they drink, your veins they string
To tie loose ends on sacks, they bring
They've filled them up, yes to the brink
When passing by their contents stink

Decaying skin, of rotting flesh
As they move on, to reap more fresh
So if a knock on door you hear
On Hallows Eve, please don't go near

Beyond the masks in dark of night
The beasts, they wait, for you to fright
And wanting you, their taste delight
The gloom unmasked extends its bite.

Distorted view, in slaughtered dreams
Doused in you, behind what seems
To tempt the demons, share their might,
On this the eve, All Hallows Night.

a-z ombie

© Copyright 2002 HollyDazed - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2002-10-29 06:25 PM


Hi there Holly welcome to PiP’s, this is an utterly utterly utterly wonderful debut post. So incredibly well written it has such a really creepy quality You brought a shiver to my spine.

Excellent work I’ll make sure I look for your work Holly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-10-29 06:42 PM




(bawls in horror) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, you truly have the spirit of the holidays in you, now you are holyydazing us all, this is a delightfully spooky debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Hollydazed, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hollydazed, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-10-29 08:33 PM



A ghostly rendition, and just in time for the festivities!  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-10-29 09:25 PM


HollyDazed - bedevilled I am after reading this of goblins, withches, and rotting flesh and such. Nice write...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-29 09:30 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Perfect entrance post just in time for the  season.
I look forward to more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-10-29 09:46 PM


This is a delightful post for the season and for your entrance to Passions.  I enjoyed this very much.  I look forward to reading more from you.  Welcome.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » ALL HALLOWS MIGHT

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary