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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-10-29 05:12 PM


Nothing in between

There is/was
a poem
not just any
poem
but a poem
stuck
between us
wondering
if the reader
will move to put
us
next to each
other
side by side
on top
or bottom
don't matter
but next
to each other
only to
break
silence
once again.


Bernie




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2002-10-29 05:13 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-29 09:02 PM


Bernie, a good poem. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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the_loner

thanks,,, only write what i feel when i write it.

garysgirl.

thank you for reading,, your so kind.....

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2002-10-29 09:15 PM


I was wondering the same thing..about  your positioning

M

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wow, I love it! Very romantic piece I think.
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6 posted 2002-10-31 07:04 AM


nakdthoughts

thank you for reading... and i used to wonder....

Bernie


passing shadows
thank you for reading, and yes that messages is in there.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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enjoyed
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