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~K
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0 posted 2002-10-29 05:07 PM



Indigo traces of madness
administered in generous doses
of ceiling hugging
flights of fancy
are just another
crude example
of the serpent
swallowing its tail
out of sheer boredom
my pitchfork and halo duel


NARAKA

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1 posted 2002-10-29 05:07 PM


Beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-29 09:30 PM


Shows power. The descriptions were very vivid, nice poem
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3 posted 2002-10-29 11:12 PM






(smiles) Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this is excellent, sweet firend, now let the mongoose come in and devour this serpent within! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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