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Open Poetry #23

an invitation

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-10-29 03:20 PM

come with me
we walk in the rain
and try not to slip
on aged bricks worn
dangerously slick
finding haven
in a dark bistro
and listen
to hot jazz
of total decadence
touch the fingers
of the ghosts
the presence
of those
who hid so well
here before us...
exiled into the future
of the past.

breathe of me deeply
and let me fill you
until...you...burst.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-10-29 03:24 PM

*inhaling*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-10-29 03:29 PM

JanetMarie...that's probably one of the most unique one word comments I have seen in a long time...

Serenity...I think the P.M.'s wore off....because this certainly wasn't written in a fog...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-10-29 03:32 PM

oooh...Kari? the quarter? is even better in the fog...mmmmm...so gothic...

oooh..WRITE THAT ONE FOR ME.

and kisses to m'twin!

thanks you two!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-29 03:43 PM

"breathe of me deeply
and let me fill you
until...you...burst."

WOW!! Amazing YOU!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-10-29 03:45 PM

Excellent images. ThisDiamond

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-11-06 12:55 PM

Sex by sweating trumpet?

Jazz is coo.

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