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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
Pretending- he couldn’t feel the rain; Walking- in the darkness; a pile of diamonds scattered like snowflakes among the sky. The moon powered over him, as he kicked the muddy puddles, like a grave with no name. A wisp of wind thrusts his sagging clothes, like chocolate left in the sun. His memories- fly about from before, Listening - to his loneliness. Freedom comes- like flying crimson in the wind. Suddenly- his broken laugh cracks the quiet of the night. His shouts- disappear into the air. No longer feeling small inside his fragmented dreams. Only- the rain on his skin. [This message has been edited by Juliette (10-29-2002 01:10 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this! And may the rainbow come out and may all those raindrops wash away and join the rivers in a confluence of great spirits and deepness of ecstasy! (sigh) This is wonderful, I love it, we all love you so much! (sends hugs from one Colorado poet to another) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juliette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful name you have and what a knock out poem. Extremely impressive and I hope we will see more of your works. Now how's that for pressure??!!  Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Wonderful write! Enjoyed so much. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Juliette, you are just so talented. How long have you been writing poetry? It has to have been for a while. It's just amazing how your words flow. Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
Thank you Ethel, Echantress, Marti, Noah! I am in such good company of talent here with you guys so your kind words mean so much. I have been writing for about four years but have loved poetry all my life even as a child I would write and read it often. It gives me so much pleasure and even more now that I can share that passion (reading & writing) with PIP members. Bless you all, Juliette |
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