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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-10-29 08:25 AM



When I think of you . . .

A kiss hovers near the warmth of my lips,
Your breath dissolves my languid sigh,

Your finger brushes a coming tear,
And yesterday’s pleasure fills my eye


Elizabeth Santos
10?29/02

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2002-10-29 08:28 AM


Awww, Liz, this is just so touching. You write the most beautiful pieces.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-10-29 08:57 AM


Elizabeth,
I have felt that way. Exquisite write.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-10-29 09:08 AM


OH Liz!  I love this!
You have an amazing way with words.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-10-29 10:45 AM


Nodding... yes... *S* Thank God for imaginations and memories... this is beautiful!
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5 posted 2002-10-29 02:15 PM


I think I will have a nap and see if I can conjure something like this up nice one Lizzie.

       
A smile costs nothing but makes someone rich.

Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-10-29 04:05 PM


This was very good for me to hear. Thank you.

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2002-10-29 07:00 PM


Thank you all,
Sharon, I've never known you to need a nap to conjure up anything
I appreciated all of the comments
THank you
Liz

Aimster
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8 posted 2002-10-29 07:11 PM


liz,

beautiful write!! lovely way of
expressing a memory...you made me
smile. thank you!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

~K
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9 posted 2002-10-29 07:14 PM


(sigh) I love the short but exquisite!
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10 posted 2002-10-29 08:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) And may loves smile always gather the teardrops from your cheeks and light your heart with glee like a childs, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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