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Rick
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0 posted 2002-10-29 05:11 AM



The ill of man through time on earth
Are boundaries that must grow in worth
The little more that they must take
Deprives us all, so sins to make

© Copyright 2002 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-10-29 06:49 AM


What amazing wisdom in four short lines.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2002-10-29 07:45 AM


Oh, I must echo Kethry, Rick ... a wonderful wisdom-packed write in so few words. Very well done, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2002-10-29 08:31 AM


Kissed by the same sun
Born of the same womb
Death takes us all back
Into the same tomb

yet some deprive others
While some are givers of love
Much richer a life

Wisdom in your lovely verse

Liz

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4 posted 2002-10-29 09:52 AM


Rick, this is wonderful that you can get so much thought into such few words. thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Rick
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5 posted 2002-10-30 05:29 AM


Kethry, thank you so much for your reply and complement.

Dear Kit, nice to hear from you again, thanks for your kind reply, I am glad you enjoyed.

Dear Liz, your reply is wonderful, thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Ethel, the sharing is a pleasure with all my friends in passions, thank you for your reply.

Sincerely Rick

May you all stay well
And of some thoughts then share and tell.

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-10-30 11:17 AM


Hi Rick, I like this, very profound thoughts.
Sandra

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-10-30 11:31 AM


Hi, Rick! You packed a lot into little poem!

Enjoyed!

Earth Angel

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