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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-29 04:12 AM


I Will
Be Sad


Honey this is crazy the
way you're all enticing me.
Then you have the nerve to
tell me you won't kiss me.
You said it has to be your choice
and we both agree on that.
I hope your choice comes sooner
and not later because at this
moment I need you bad.
Not sure what I'm gonna do
if you don't hurry up and
let me get closer to you.
I know I will be sad.

JamesLee
Oct28
2002

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
1 posted 2002-10-29 08:45 AM


Awww, I'm sorry you're sad. Hope things in your life improve soon.

Life is too short to be sad...
Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-10-29 09:19 AM


Ooh James....hope things work out for you..
and don't be sad.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-29 09:47 AM


Dear sweet James, I hope that your feelings  will change so that you will be   HAPPY   instead of sad. thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-10-29 11:01 AM


Funny thing about love is that it can go from being sad one minute to being the best experience in the world the next. I wish you to enjoy the latter, but in the meantime, your words touched me.

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-29 01:14 PM




(big hugggssssss) I'm sorry to hear of your sadness, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for all to go well for you soon and for you to be happy forevermore! (sigh) I send angel hugs of relief your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-10-29 02:17 PM


Wonderful, heart and soul expression when love begins to part. Thank you.

etoodog

Marsha
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7 posted 2002-10-29 10:32 PM


James darling man this is exquisite writing,  truly wonderful expression darling man utterly utterly wonderful I love this utterly utterly utterly as always YOUR writing is simply perfect.

If I could hold the starlight
And wrap it in a cloak of might
I would drape its silvered glow
Around your soul just like so
If within the thought of touch
I could gift you with this much
I would whisper yes to the air
Send it flying away to where
The words stroke across your soul
Rising to fill the aching hole
The possible within the sigh
The wondering of pleasure’s aye
If I could gift this dreamers might
I would unwrap hope’s delight

I hope she says yes soon


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Hockeychick19
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8 posted 2002-10-30 03:04 PM


It's a sad one, but it's absolutely beautiful. I love it! Keep up the good work and I hope things work out for you.

All the best,
Kelly

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2002-10-30 04:03 PM


Hi James, I hope it all works out. Nice write.
Sandra

Walter Poe
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10 posted 2002-10-30 04:12 PM


Enjoy what is not what will be life is fleeting savour the moment it makes what comes that much sweeter

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

vandana
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11 posted 2002-10-30 06:36 PM


enjoyed
*Stubby*
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since 2002-09-19
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12 posted 2002-10-30 08:03 PM


  J
Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
13 posted 2002-10-31 04:40 AM


sad but beautifully written

Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
14 posted 2002-10-31 09:56 AM


I know those feelings...a kiss in wait is  painful...

hugss
M

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