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Red
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0 posted 2002-10-28 11:21 PM



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or something
more...
what speaks?
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words


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Christopher
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1 posted 2002-10-28 11:31 PM


ouch... this one hurts!
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2 posted 2002-10-29 12:35 PM


It's is very nice to see you here again. Welcome home.
Red
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3 posted 2002-10-29 01:20 AM


Thank you Poet deVine...  it's been awhile, I must say I almost forgot about this site, but now I remember how much I like it.
Christopher- it wasn't meant to hurt.lol  I was reading the punctuation in poetry thread in the English Workshop forum and this is  what resulted.

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4 posted 2002-10-29 02:40 AM


Red, this was interesting to me. But, until I read your explanation in your reply to Christopher, I thought of something entirely different. I thought of how I can't tell, sometimes, if poet's are writing from "OBSERVATION",   "INSPIRATION",   or
actual  "PARTICIPATION".  
Maybe I'm not supposed to be able to tell the difference?!? I don't know.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Love To All,
Ethel

Red
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5 posted 2002-10-29 02:55 AM


garysgirl--  maybe the difference doesn't matter??  Who knows??
I suppose I was writing from observation here.. reading through the English workshop thread got me thinking and I guess I think that while punctuation can help lead to something more, some greater meaning in a poem or whatnot, I believe it to be constraining and I'd like to think that words are freer than that and are where the true 'voice' of a poem is found..  again, who knows?  Thanks for replying, I'm off to bed, have a good evening!!

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6 posted 2002-10-29 12:14 PM


Way to go RED!! I'm not much into punctuation in my poetry either. I feel it tends to distract from the message, but then again, an occasional question mark or two sometimes helps with the flow.. Guess it's really up to the individual writer. I like to think it doesn't really matter one way or another, as long as the poem is from the heart of the writer, the message gets there either way. Thanks for sharing this.
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7 posted 2002-10-29 11:53 PM




(smiles) Oh Melissa, this is excellent, sweet friend, I do love punctuation in poetry in certain instances but I agree too it could be distracting to the depth of ones own heart in it and it is the voice and the purity of ones thoughts that matter most! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



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8 posted 2002-10-29 11:57 PM


hope my teasing came across right! actually, i found this rather amusing.
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