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Open Poetry #23

Blissful Forgetting

Night_Myst
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 34
River Falls, WI

0 posted 2002-10-28 10:52 PM

My head sinks
Deeper into the pillow
All tension
Leaving my body

My mind drifts to peace
And off to sleep
Before I remember
You're not here

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-10-28 10:55 PM

Peaceful wanderings my friend. Well done.
ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-28 10:58 PM

Excellent ending on this!!
Love it!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

3 posted 2002-10-28 11:05 PM

Your smile is everything written about here. You will be remembered, I'm sure. Thank you.

etoodog

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

4 posted 2002-10-30 05:30 PM

What a fabulous description of wonderful sleep

... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-30 05:34 PM

This made me have a peaceful feeling. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

6 posted 2002-11-15 12:33 PM

Exceptional.

I like the wonderfully bastardized haiku style.

Lovely, truly lovely.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-12-14 04:03 AM

I wish it were that easy for me...

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