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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-10-28 05:52 PM


THE SUN DOES NOT SHINE
IT HAS BEEN RAINING ALL WEEK
I WISH IT WOULD STOP

10-29-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-28 05:52 PM


Yes, I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-10-28 06:07 PM


Enjoyed!
Thanks for sharing!

*Stubby*
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3 posted 2002-10-28 06:37 PM


Same Here J

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-10-28 06:53 PM


And you know how much I love these! My favorite type of poem to write.

Excellent, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-28 06:55 PM


Good one Sue!
Now you stick to these short ones until you heal!
~Big Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Wind
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6 posted 2002-10-28 07:38 PM


I like the rain. But hey, everybody's different. Neat little poem
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-10-28 07:43 PM


Very neat little write. ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-10-29 07:53 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, I hope the sun comes out this week again and the rain stops, sweet friend, meanwhile over here we could use your rain to help the drought, God Bless You and hope you're feeling better, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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