»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
The mountain's cold Breath (Advanced Haiku, very hard)
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
The mountain's cold Breath (Advanced Haiku, very hard) |
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
|
Mountains that tower In the distance the sunrise The vally below The moon blazes above me The wind's temptation Calls me in the darkest night Soars above the earth Like the vision of a ghost The mountains cold breath [This message has been edited by Wind (10-28-2002 05:23 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wind, an admirable effort! You ought to see about enrolling into the Poetry Workshop...for someone who takes this much effort in working on their writing, you would enjoy that forum a lot! Nan, our instructor, loves to push our minds! Not to mention our pens! |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
good idea, I'll look into that sunnshine. Thanks a lot Umm Sunshine, What is the poetry workshop? [This message has been edited by Wind (10-28-2002 06:29 PM).] |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Wind... Come on over to the Poetry Workshop and join in our last few days of writing Tanka. I've approved you for posting with the group. You might also join in our Open Passions Choka. We're having a great time with it. I'm pleased to see you enjoying Passions so much...  |
||
garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wind, you are a very talented young lady. I hope that you do well in these workshops. You seem to have a lot of drive and determination. Well, I may not see much of you here, so, little friend, I'm going to put you in my favorite poets thing in my library. Then, maybe I won't miss your poems. I'd go to those workshops, but I don't have that much talent. I know you do, though. Above all, have fun, friend. Thanks for sharing this fine work you did. Love And Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Wow! This is REALLY an AWESOME Haiku! Hope to see you and your talent in the Poetry workshop. Isn't this the GREATEST place!! Tammy |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thank you guys for your heartfelt replys. I am honored to have been chosen to take part in the poetry workshop. And don't worry Ethel, I wouldn't every stop writing in open poetry, its like a home away from home, and it is the reason I discovered the amaizing site. And I will always read your poetry because you DO have talend |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
opps, wrote it twice! [This message has been edited by Wind (10-30-2002 03:48 PM).] |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I have never heard of a haiku in this form and count before, I would love to learn it as I am sure it is a fascinating form! (kiss on cheek) The mountains tower in your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
