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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-10-28 01:55 PM



Don't get down
When people make fun of you
Just ignore them
Make them think they are the fools

Never let them talk down to you
About your looks
How smart you are
Your weight
Nothing

Some people can be cruel
They want you to feel like the fool
Don't let them do that to you
Because you are worth more
Than they will ever be

Just move on
If they keep buggin' you
Just let it fly
You don't need there crud
if you say something back
They think they've won

So don't get down
Just think that they aren't worth your time
You have real friends out there
You just have to look in the right places
Look for people you trust
Look for the people who truly like you for who you are
And never forget that

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2002-10-28 02:16 PM


Too true Julie. Thanks for the advice and the awesome poem.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
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NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2002-10-28 02:31 PM


Julie, you are so right. Nice job of writing.

Marti

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Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-28 03:12 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, this is so very true, and know you are loved by all of us and that is all that matters when one cannot seem to understand you and attempt to change you! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-10-28 11:11 PM


Well said Julie. Glad we found you.
ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-10-29 12:09 PM


Julie, this is a really well written poem...and with so much truth and wisdom. You are   SOOOO  right, Julie. When people are treating others like you said, they just need to be ignored until they change their attitudes.
Thanks for sharing your feelings.

Love to All,
Ethel

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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6 posted 2002-10-29 12:14 PM


hey hey! this poem was awesome

it reminded me of a song;

Don't stop never give up
hold your head high and reach the top
bring it all back to you

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-10-29 12:30 PM


This is true true and more true every day, Julie... and you expressed it very well...
When people treat you that way...
its THEIR problem...not yours...
~ hugs with acorns and self esteem

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-10-29 01:26 AM


excellent! Thanks for the reminder Julie!
~K
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9 posted 2002-10-29 04:00 AM


Good advice is so easily forgotten...maybe I should print this
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