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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-10-28 12:56 PM


I wish that I could
reach out      touch
your heart,
and whisper    softly
everything will be fine.
Wrapping you in my warmth
I would               heal
the pain seen
in your eyes
and heard
in your voice.
I would cradle you
in our love,
show you          that love
is real.
Could your heart         but hear
mine speaking
then you           would know
how much that you
are loved...
please~
listen.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-10-28 01:24 PM



This begs to tell that person
pull the cotton out!

A nice write, Donna!

RSWells
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2 posted 2002-10-28 01:26 PM


A warm invitation. Enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-10-28 01:37 PM


I always  enjoy the softness of your words Donna

hope all is well
M

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2002-10-28 01:53 PM


lovely you, in all your wisdom....how truth speaks....


Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Martie
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5 posted 2002-10-28 02:05 PM


Donna

Beautiful and sincere words of heart.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
6 posted 2002-10-28 02:33 PM


Donna, so many do not listen or hear and miss so much.

This was so good. Thank you.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

RMW
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7 posted 2002-10-28 02:37 PM


I agree with the others .... this is soft and sensitive. Bob
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-10-28 02:47 PM


A very genuine and heartfelt reach...beautifully penned. ThisDiamond
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-10-28 02:52 PM


Love this Donna..
So many 'hear' but so few 'listen'...
Beautiful sweetie.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2002-10-28 02:56 PM




(sigh) Oh Donna, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it saddens me to see so many fail to listen when they claim to be hearing as true love is meant only for those who can listen to anothers heart and feelings! (big hugggssssss) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
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right...there
11 posted 2002-10-28 03:53 PM


There have been times when I needed to both say and hear what you wrote in this write...this spoke to me...beautifully penned...

...believe what your heart feels...

Robert Adamson
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12 posted 2002-10-28 04:36 PM


I like everything about these healing thoughts as they must be recieved. Thank you.

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