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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-01 01:17 PM



His Smile


That beguiling smile,
Hiding a well kept secret.
Agitation and lies…..
You’ve overturned
Her heart yet again….
Spilling blood….
Defiling

Why?

One tantalizing smile….
Your thorny words are death.
Tasting is so sweet
With a tainted bitter twist

Why?

In one smile
Your dark shadow creeps black
Over regions of her soul
With intense lightning and thunder…..
Unleashing the fervent terror
Of your darkly caged words.

Let her go….
Your ravenous smile
Kills her
Over and over
Again.




Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (11-01-2002 01:19 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-11-01 01:27 PM


I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-01 03:53 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Cheryl, I can understand this feeling of incarceration and blind addiction where one does not want the attention but power consumes and traps another! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to all who are victimized by this and I encourage them all to be strong and break free or seek help, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

cjohnson/poet2079
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since 2002-07-31
Posts 35
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3 posted 2002-11-01 04:09 PM


yes! csk, I love the poem! I have felt the thorny words prick my heart many times and it hurts.  


poetry is "echoes of the heart"
eyssence

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-11-01 04:22 PM


Oh Cher...I knew this smile..
once knew this man...
Excellent write m'dear!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-11-01 10:55 PM


the loner:  I hate this behaviour, but i am glad the poem says it as it has
Thanks and hugs, Cher

Noah: Yes it is sad and I was one of these victims for many years...It took a lot till I finally got brave and left the abuse ( mostly to my heart)
thanks for your comments.
hugs, Cher

cjohnson:
I hope you have gotten free of this person..Yes it hurts and is damage to one's soul...thanks for your reply
hugs, Cher

Nancy Lee: I sure hope you got away from this...I will never allow myself to be a victim again....Thanks for your sweet comments!
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-11-02 06:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-11-02 10:22 PM


Cher, you're so right...abuse is a terrible thing,
no matter what kind it is. I'm glad that
you aren't in it any more. Thanks for
sharing your heart.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
                  Ethel

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