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I’ll Not Share
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I’ll Not Share |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I’ll share with you the happy times The moments of love wrapped in rhyme The taste of honey that sweetens me Those moments of love’s eternity All those times when I’m full of hope Even those times I find it hard to cope I’ll share with you my heart’s desire And what fills my soul with raging fire I’ll share the triumphs of my own war What I dream, what I wish for The moments when I’m held spellbound The thrill I get when I hear love’s sound I’ll share the music I dance too Share the joys of being with you The touch of truth that comforts me All the thoughts that set me free But I’ll not share the chilling pain Nor share with you the icy rain The way my soul will bend and bow You’ll not see my teardrops flow My crying I will do in privacy I’ll not let you try to comfort me No I’ll not share the crying time The pain of loss that alone is mine My soul rings with light’s clearest tone But my crying I would do alone Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (10-28-2002 01:02 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No I’ll not share the crying time The pain of loss that alone is mine My soul rings with light’s clearest tone But my crying I would do alone ~*~ Ah, now.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But love within a sincere heart Seeks not to be all sorrows spared Open your life, both good and bad For trouble's halved when it is shared. A lover true would never ask To only see a smiling mask. I really like the poem, Marsha... even though I think someone who really loves you would want to share ALL of you and not just the sunshine. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I understand..this very loving poem... hugsss M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, this is a wonderfully touching poem, and I too agree with Suthern; it hurts to bottle up the grief inside for so long so share it with your best friend and you will feel much better! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, A wonderful write and read. You write very well. My soul rings with light’s clearest tone But my crying I would do alone Lovely end. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis... this writing was remarkable...i know the feelings behind this and the whys... and all i can say is i love you! this was beautiful even in it's sadness. love me  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Your poetry has a very sweet heart! Thank you. etoodog |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fantastic writing, Mushy One! I agree with the sentiment completely. It's good when poetry is based on hopes, desires, dreams, fantasies and things to make people smile and share their happiness with you. Write on, dear mush-filled one!!!  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh dear, now you got me wipe a tear from me eye. Geez I know you could write beautiful poems, but this one just hit the heart.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Great work. I really enjoyed it. I am glad that you will share with us |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, flowing from the pen of a truly gifted lady....Well done darling girl.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Not even with me, now I'm crushed. I understand the need for privacy dear heart and I respect that but even so... Heart hugs Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, I understand your wanting privacy. I know from the poems I write, some may think I don't keep ANYTHING private, but I do have some emotions inside that I very seldom share with ANYONE besides my Gary. I do hope that you have someone special that you can share even that other part with. Anyway, I'm very happy that you shared this beautiflly written poem of yours with all of us here. Love to All, Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Friend reporting in ... 'But my crying I would do alone' Not as long as I live !!! Sending the hugs to wrap your heart in times of need~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
mum wonderful writing. You never fail to write well and this is outstanding. Beautiful work. Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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