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0 posted 2002-10-28 10:30 AM


I saw a little Mockingbird,  getting
something to eat
He lit right on the feeder to eat
of the nectar sweet

He took a litle sip, then another,
maybe one or two
Then he paused for a moment in midair
then backwards he flew

He did this back and forth for just a few
minutes, it seemed
Then off he flew away, with litle tiny
wings that gleamed

Soon there'll be all different kinds, for
the birds fly South, we're told
But we're already here in the South, you see,
where it never gets very cold

Soon Autumn will be over, with Winter's
approaching soon
We'll soon hear the birds from the North
here, singing a happy tune

Something else always happens, that I've often
wondered about
Where do these little Mockingbirds go, for they
surely leave this "South"



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1 posted 2002-10-28 11:07 AM


Well done! I love birds. BTW, I think they may all hang out at Marge's place for a poetic rest.
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2 posted 2002-10-28 11:13 AM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwww, I love mockingbirds and all kinds of birds, especially sparrows and cute little finches and hummingbirds! (kiss on cheek) I too wonder where they go but I know one thing, they will always stop here! This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-10-28 11:33 AM


Midnitesun, thanks for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. You're right, they may all go to sweet Marge's.


Love to All,
Ethel

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4 posted 2002-10-28 11:36 AM


Thanks, Noah, for your sweet reply. Yep, they surely do stop here don't they??  HeeHee!!!! Thanks.

Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-28 12:20 PM


THIS IS A WONDERFUL POEM, ETHEL! I AM LIKE YOU. WONDERING WHERE THE BIRDS GO SINCE YOU ARE ALREADY IN THE SOUTH?
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6 posted 2002-10-28 01:40 PM


very nice...I would love to hear a mockingbird..I don't think I ever have..

*s
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7 posted 2002-10-28 02:07 PM


Ethel

A sweet read!

I'll tell you where they go
off to Southern California
didn't you know?

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8 posted 2002-10-28 02:29 PM


Really like the narriation in this. I have often wondered too where they go certainly not to Colorado!
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9 posted 2002-10-28 02:29 PM


Ethel, so that's where my mockingbirds have gone. Hmmm....if I were smart, I'd have gone to Florida with them.

This was very cute.  Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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10 posted 2002-10-28 05:19 PM


Sue.....Reckon where they do go to ???? Thanks for reading my poem.

Maureen...I think they just tweet. They are so cute, though. Thanks for your reply.

Martie...Yeah, I'll bet that's where they go, Southern Calf., or somewhere farther South. Thanks, Martie.
Juliette....OOOOHHH. I imagine it gets  REAL  cold there in Colorado. I would love the snow, though. Thank you for your reply.

Marti....Aren't they cute little things? I love to watch them flying around the feeders. Gary's Dad got some cute pictures of them eating from the feeders. I Thanks for your reply.
Love  To  All,
Ethel

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11 posted 2002-10-28 08:34 PM


garysgirl - this little mockingbird is right outside my window. That's were he is....

BC

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12 posted 2002-10-28 11:22 PM


Well, Bill...I sure am glad that you found him. Isn't he cute?? Thanks


Love to All,
Ethel

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