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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-10-28 09:16 AM



It’s all for the birds


listening sounds
of outside
notes that are free
free to be heard
never to be bought
always ever changing
though the tune
still the same
beating different each time
the ear listening
to the sounds
free to be heard.

Bernie


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-28 09:24 AM


Beautiful write here Bernie...
On the weekend I had the pleasure of watching a sky full of whistling swans...
absolutely took my breath away...
so the title of this grabbed me right away.
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

VAS
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2 posted 2002-10-28 09:27 AM


and they are lovely sounds
that are balm to one's essence

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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3 posted 2002-10-28 09:29 AM


Enchantress
thank you,,, and yes amazing....
while writing this, all the neighborhood birds were in a melody.. I was and am on the launi (la`ni)(for those up north that still call them back porches)listening to all this.

VAS
yes and thank-you for reading

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2002-10-28 09:38 AM


this is quite beautiful, Bernie

You should post your thoughts more often.

~smiling
M

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5 posted 2002-10-28 09:42 AM


nakdthoughts
Thanks
I try, but sometimes just don't know how to put the words down... and sometimes by the time i write them i have forgot them... but then sitting hear listening to this,, that was easy.

But I will more often..

Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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6 posted 2002-10-28 10:04 AM


Bernie, this is so pretty. I could almost hear the birds singing. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to more of your work.
Love To All,
Ethel

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