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joedreamer
New Member

since 2002-10-16

Posts 3

0 posted 2002-10-28 01:11 AM

Love From a Distance

I wish I had a magic watch
so I could turn back time.
To the days when we were happy
and your eyes they looked at mine.

But the reality is not as good as the dreams I have inside
You stand away at a distance
My broken heart I hide.

I accept it now
I know its true
this is no childhood infatuation
I've matured with life
I'm all grown up
I need re-evaluation...

From you, the one I need the most
the one I hold so dear.

So dont look at me with blinded eyes
my pleads you need to hear.

My love for you I know its true
I feel it in my bones.
The childishness of youthful years
I hope I have atoned...

With years of waiting for your love
To stand so far away.
Here are my cards their shown to you
Your eyes,
dont turn away.

These words are not simply things
that I have said before.
I need you in my life again.
Of this I must implore.

I long for you and only you
there's no room for substitution
My love for you I know its true
That's my final absolution.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-10-28 03:11 AM

I hope the answer you receive is affirmative - nicely done.

A smile costs nothing but makes someone rich.

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2002-10-28 08:21 AM

This is a good write.
Hope that someone reads this too.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-10-30 04:15 PM

Been there done that and it didn't do and darned good. [alliteration unintended]

Enjoyed the read!
God bless!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-30 04:29 PM

(sigh) Oh Joe, this is soooooo gorgeous and heartfelt, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well as I too am experiencing a long-distance romance with my sweet Joanna, and it can hurt sometimes yet I wish you the greatest happiness always! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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