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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2002-10-27 09:03 PM







Each day...I see the question marks
floating through the cosmos.
Questions of you floating through
my mind. How? When? Where?
Your glitter of star-bright wonder
at the moment of what will be,
at the second of what may be forever.
Just a glimpse of my eternity
sparkling through the Moon,
just a snapshot of you
in the eons of my soul.
The dancing light strobing
the pulse of my being.
And, you are the surge of energy
that quickens my enlightened heart.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2002-10-27 09:05 PM


Oh, I really liked this...such a great flow and upbeat. ThisDiamond
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-27 10:00 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the celestial feel of this, you always make the moon shine in your words! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-10-27 10:15 PM


Ivy Rose - this is most charming, and touching...

BC

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21
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4 posted 2002-10-28 01:36 AM


There is magic in your pulse, guiding others through the dark. Thank you.

etoodog

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2002-10-28 09:03 AM


Ivy this was so light and airy and made me feel as though I was drifting on a cloud.

Wonderful write ... hugs, Marti


Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

[This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (10-28-2002 09:04 AM).]

bslicker
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state of mind
6 posted 2002-10-28 09:21 AM


enjoyed

Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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7 posted 2002-10-28 09:27 AM


..Ivy Rose../\..very nice; thanks..


../\..Spiros

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