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Lakeside Beatitudes
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Lakeside Beatitudes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the presence of great water Emotions cupped within the wind This radiance to pink in ardor All through the wooded paths rescind And in this awestruck fascination Emerald and white tipped waves Flowing dunes in trepidation As if the echo sky enslaves In this place of wooded whispers Near to God in all bestowed Present only blessed drifters Heart and soul in sunshine bowed And in easy soft surrender Never hurried to be done In the presence of great water All the jewels there glitter on Copyright Kkh 10/27/02 |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is simply beautiful!!! Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The images were great and I really liked the meter. paladin |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
What a gorgeous poem!!!! Your imagery is so clear and vivid...that I feel myself engulfed in the warm salt-water of the seas. ***Ivy Rose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Kathy... It sounds like you have been out to visit our beautiful Lake Michigan... I especially love the last line, because This Diamond is one of the jewels that glitters on  ~ Michigan hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, we have many lakes in Colorado that I love so much, I'm worried though they may dry up and I pray for much more precipitation to come! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - wooded whispers, just lovely... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jewels that glisten just as you yourself do. Nice write of the view...thanx..makes me feel UP there... |
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