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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-27 12:47 PM



Saved on fingertips of time
gentle pleasures that are mine
there with subtle of imprint
all you are, the words, the script,
to place on satin, as in touch
slip across with feel of love,
read with only lightest graze
the memories, the dreams, the days.

WhiteRose 10/27/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-27 01:01 PM


This is beautiful, Anne. You are a good poet. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-27 01:09 PM


This is wonderful...oh, those memories!


I enjoy your poetry a great deal.

Warmly,
Pat

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3 posted 2002-10-27 01:40 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, this reminded me of in the Iliad when Dawn is described with "rosy fingertips" which you paint in these words! (kiss on cheek) You are always a delight to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-27 03:11 PM


Just lovely Anne. hugs, Chris  

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5 posted 2002-10-27 08:08 PM


Very Nice J

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