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Pezz1
Junior Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

0 posted 2002-10-27 11:20 AM

I really want
an incredibly romantic evening sitting upon a beach
watching the sun slowly lower beneath the waves out over the horizon,
the sky seemingly catching fire as the last rays dip
below the contours of the world.
Nearly silent apart from the waves gently lapping on the sand
as the tide ebbs,
and the soft breathing of the beautiful Haley
next to me
as we experience a moment
of perfect peace in a cosmos filled with chaos.

A moment where we are the only living beings in the universe,
a nanosecond when we turn and embrace in our love for one another,
a millisecond when this world stops moving,
an instant in time when we share each others thoughts,
feelings, in perfect harmony and rapport.
Knowing the other in a way no-one else can.

Time shifts, the clock ticks,
a second passes all is normal all is infinintly
greater.
In that one single solitary instance we have known more,
something larger,
a promise of what could be,
a fleeting glance at a future yet to be discovered,
explored a chance to take hold of and grasp.

You look up to me gazing at you in awe,
knowledge is gathered,
assimilated,
an undersanding passes between our eyes,
minds, souls and standing we go home,

TOGETHER.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-27 11:31 AM

Peter, this is SOOO beautiful. I hope that the one who inspired you to write this sees it and can read the love in your words. You do have a way with words, friend.
And WELCOME to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy it here amongst this big "Family Of Friends" as much as I have this past month that I have been here. I'm sure you will, because your poem shows that you have a very loving and genuine heart. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. I hope to read more of your work.
Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-10-27 11:36 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry. This is a great poetic place where incurable romantics such as you are always embraced...

Check your email for a special greeting as well...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-27 11:51 AM

Pezz, welcome to Passions! I do believe you are going to enjoy yourself around here. Sit back, have a cup of coffee, get acquainted, and above all, write on!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-27 11:54 AM

Welcome to Passions, and what a great love poem for your first post.

I love it! Especially, the last three lines. The poem is quite precious.

Thanks so much for sharing it,
Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-27 11:55 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
What an outstanding first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-10-27 11:59 AM

Lovely indeed!! Welcome to Passions!! Have fun here. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Pezz1
Junior Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

7 posted 2002-10-27 12:06 PM

Thank you all for the welcome its greatly appreciated and i look forward to reading your own peices soon.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-10-27 12:20 PM

Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I envisioned everything; the gorgeous Haley's comet passing through your hearts as you and your love touched, the tears of joy, the waves singing songs. This is beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Peter, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2002-10-27 12:22 PM

Welcome Pezz,
Yes, this is a special place with very special people and you will fit in nicely. Fine post, I look forward to reading more.

SimplyGold

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-27-2002 12:23 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-10-27 12:26 PM

Pezz1
A palette of bold colors, enjoyed.

bre28
New Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 3

11 posted 2002-10-27 02:17 PM

hello! wow i am glad that u posted this. it touched me the first time i read it and it touches me still. The vivid imagery i get everytime i read this is awe inspiring. i hope u continue to write and look forward to seeing more

*KOTC* i hope u two succeed in this dream and make many more happy ones.

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