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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-27 10:47 AM


“THOUGHTS OF YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Your face is a rainbow, radiant as I look,
eyes piercing blue, soft, like summer rain…
Hair of silk flowing past your shoulders,
lips most delicate, mine you drive insane…

Ears sensitive to soft whispers of caring,
fingers gentle, as they touch in harmony…
Caresses warm with the thoughts of you,
many places you travel, touching on me…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-27 11:00 AM


Hi, Bill. I really loved this romantic poem. It gets the mind wondering????!!!!?????
Thanks for sharing.


Love To all,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-27 12:15 PM


Women are beautiful aren't they?
What would we do without them!

Enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing.

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3 posted 2002-10-27 12:17 PM




(sigh) Your words flow through her ears like a zephyr, sweet friend, I love this, your love will always be lucky to have a wonderful sensitive man like you, God Bless You, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-27 12:17 PM


Dang!  My eyes aren't blue!!
Beautiful poem Bill...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-10-27 01:51 PM


This one spoke to my heart. How beautifully you write of that one who captures your heart and soul. BRAVO!!! This is wonderful.
***Ivy Rose

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6 posted 2002-10-27 03:09 PM


Bill - sighing deeply here dear poet. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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