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vandana
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0 posted 2002-10-27 10:40 AM


You can looked
Into my eyes
But you never change
My heart for you
You can take my
heart away
And tried every second of
your breathe
To change me
But you can't change me
Because I have my own rules
In my life
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You can't change my life for you
you can't change my heart for you
You can't change my life
For your feelings
on me
You never make to change
my feelings for you
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I have got my own rules
And you can't change
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You can have other things
In your life
But you can't change my life
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Radrook
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1 posted 2002-10-27 12:21 PM


Funny how everyone wants to change somebody else but don't change themselves!
LOL
Enjoyed!
Thanks for sharing!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-27 12:23 PM




(sigh) Yes, and if one tries to push you aside, you push him away for only you can change your life! (kiss on cheek) Powerful determination fills your words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2002-10-27 12:28 PM


A simple fact it is. So hard to understand.
As Peter, Paul and Mary sang: "When will they ever learn, when will they ever learn"

Enjoyed.
SG

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-27 12:35 PM


Vandana, this poem is beautiful, but so sad. Friend, I believe that when someone tries to change another person into their own making, they don't really love that person. I spent so much of my past trying to please someone else. That's one reason that I love Gary so much.... he loves me just because I'm  ME. It really amazes me sometimes, but it is the truth. Some other people in my past were  ALWAYS  trying to change me. I'm so glad that I found someone like I have now. I hope that you find someone that loves you because you  ARE  Y-O-U. It sure will make you feel good when you do.
Thanks for sharing with us.


Love To All,
Ethel...garysgirl


P.S. I feel that you have to  LIKE  some one before you can truly   LOVE  them. In othr words, be "friends" as well as "loves".

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-27-2002 12:39 PM).]

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