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Another Chance
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Another Chance |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Another Chance If love would come and unfold itself just one more time The stars in the night would twinkle and my hollow heart would find a pulse If love would open up its door and give a second chance then howling wolves who guard the night would turn their yearnings to song and in the center of the midnight moon sing a chorus of found refrain If love would again open up my eyes Then all I need see would be the truth of simple beauty and in that truth unconditional acceptance of love's forgiveness If just one more time love chanced to me c2002simplygold |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
very nicely done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
...and my hollow heart would find a pulse.... I like that line, as well as the rest of the poem. It is lovely. Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So good to read you again... How well you have spoken of the haunting, when at last it is the love we find inside ourselves that shifts the tide. ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - I felt the haunting, and wanting, when I read this. I know that you are Simply Gold... BC |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I believe in second chances and another chance but there is only one you. God bless and thank you. etoodog |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Enchantress, Loner and Regards2you. So glad you stopped in, looking for you. SimplyGold |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Electra, such yearning fills your words but I know with all my heart with a golden heart as deserving as yours you will win this second chance and hold this joy forever! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, here's wishing you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This Diamond, You are so right in your statement. You cut to the chase, I've learned the hard way. Just read your latest and loved it.  SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-26-2002 10:16 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, Thank you. I feel connected to you through your poetry and the sensitivity you express and share. Affectionately, SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Robert, Thank you for your sweet reply. I see that you are somewhat new. I will look for your posts. Sincerely, SimplyGold |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Greetings Noah, Thank you for your sentiments. Always a pleasure to hear from you.. SG |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I feel the pain and the wanting in these words, Electra... You've written it so very well, it brought tears to my eyes ~ teary hugsLyra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Electra, very well written and much enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Electra, I loved this poem. It's so beautiful and well written. Thanks for sharing it with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Dear Chippy, I understand those tears and am touched that you have been so moved but, let them be tears of joy. Love has opened her arms to you and David. You have found your unconditional love and love has given you unconditional forgiveness. SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-27-2002 09:15 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is SimplyLovely, SimplyGold... Love shall find a way - If we're wise enough to recognize it when it knocks...  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
If............if only. Enjoyed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Nan, Yes, this is true. Love the icons. SimplygGold |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Awesome! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
RS Wells and Vandana, Good to have you here. Thank you for stopping in and glad you enjoyed. SimplyGold |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Rad, Your comment means so much! As I consider you one of my cherished teachers. Respectfully, SimplyGold |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Nan, Thank you. I'm keeping my ears open to that wisdom. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold Well done, enjoyed |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Seymour, Looking for you! SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-27-2002 05:18 PM).] |
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