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Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-10-26 07:51 PM

Dear to heart, Pam's surrounding jeans
Planets nor Spectacle so ever ought
Originate, nay, could not, a ballet
Near melodies of candlelight forgot

Warm as the sun charmed by the godly
Like the swift patter...where deer cross
And a snoopy card, some 'fun', 'See ya soon'
Then dear to heart, she's dear to heart!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-10-26 08:18 PM

Robert - really great write, much meaning I've read in this... I like your style of writing that I see in this.

BC

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

2 posted 2002-10-26 08:39 PM

I found it a bit roundabout, but I liked it. A very sweet sentiment put beautifully.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-26 09:01 PM

Robert, this is a beautiful poem you've written here. The sweet love that you have for your neice shows through so real. thanks for sharing with us.

Love To All,
Ethel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-10-26 09:18 PM

Ah, I see images of the merry-go-round to Barbie Dolls...to preteen...
What spirit in the elfin ballerina visioned here. Well done. ThisDiamond

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-10-26 10:24 PM

Very effective and heartfelt write, Robert. You can feel the great love you hold in your heart for Pam. Wonderful poem.
***Ivy Rose

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2002-10-26 10:31 PM

Very endearing expression of love. I wonder if your neice shares your talent and reads your poetry?

SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-26 10:47 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and I know your Pam will always love you so much too and hold you dear to her heart always as a wonderful uncle! (big hugggssssss) You have a golden heart as she does, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you fr sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2002 10:48 PM).]

Red
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since 2000-01-01

Posts 143
Ca

8 posted 2002-10-26 11:30 PM

I really like this.. I felt the ballet of your love for your niece. Excellent.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-10-29 03:59 AM

Enjoyed...James

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