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TradingSpaces19
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0 posted 2002-10-26 06:31 PM



The one I love is someone dear
who only I wish could be near.

But now that you are gone and we're through
I sit and wonder what to do.

Because you were right and I was wrong
and now its time to change the song.

And even though that we're apart
there's still a place for you in my heart.

Now I guess its up to you to decide
there's no way either can run and hide.

I only wish that you could see
just how much you mean to me.

© Copyright 2002 Andrea Kruckenberg - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2002-10-26 07:24 PM


Very touching poem. I think we've all been there, and, if you are writing about yourself, I hope it all works out.


Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-10-26 08:31 PM


TradingSpaces19 - I'm sure it's known how much you miss. The best to you, and perhaps a little time will heal...

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (10-26-2002 08:32 PM).]

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-26 09:17 PM


Andrea, this is such a good poem and so well written. It seemed to me that you were pouring your heart out to a lost love. I'm so sorry if you are the one feeling this, Andrea. I hope that things get beter real soon. Thanks for sharing you poem.
Love To All,
Ethel

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2002-10-26 09:36 PM


I have been there, and completly understand  how you feel.
Very well written expression of love and longing.

Deb

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5 posted 2002-10-26 10:36 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Andrea, this is so very touching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon this love returns to your heart and you find the true joy you deserve ever so much! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

TradingSpaces19
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6 posted 2002-10-29 05:53 PM


Thank you all so much for your kind, kind words. I love you all so much. Thank you for reading my poetry.

Love,
Andrea Kruckenberg

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