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CAREFULLY I MOVE
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CAREFULLY I MOVE |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ BY SUE ~ WHY IS IT THAT I BELIEVE HIM WHEN HE HAS LIED SO MANY TIMES WHAT MAKES ME THINK HE WILL BE THERE WHEN BEFORE HE PAID ME NO MIND WHY DOES HE TELL ME TO CALL HIM WHEN HE IS NOT AVAILABLE TO BE SO DRUNK EACH TIME I CALL WHAT MAKES HIM THINK HE WOULD BE ABLE TO BE LEFT ALONE WITHOUT HELP IS SUCH A SCAREY THING TO ME UNABLE TO GET AROUND MUCH TO LEAVE ME ALONE ~ HOW COULD HE AT TIMES IT HURTS MY RIBS SO BAD WHENEVER I TRY TO MOVE SOMETIMES MY LEG GIVES OUT ON ME MY BALANCE I FEAR I WILL LOSE I DO THE BEST I KNOW TO DO WITH NO ONE HERE TO EVEN HELP VERY CAREFULLY I MOVE SINCE FOR ME THERE IS NO ONE ELSE 10-26-02 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - I believe you are too smart for, You know what I mean, I believe... BC |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Some men don't apreciate the treasure they have until they lose it. Other men who would apreciate what they have never have a treasure to lose. Enjoyed the read. God bless! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue...I hope you're feeling some better today. I know it's going to take a long time for you to heal. I love your poem, Sweet Sue. I could tell that it's from the heart. Sue, I honestly believe that you are a very big part of this family of friends here at PIP, and I know that everyone forms a big circle of love and prayers. I know that you are right in the middle of that circle of love and I hope that you can feel it. I know it would help tremendously if some of us could actually be there with you to help you, but since that's obviously impossible, I hope you feel the love and prayers and our hearts with you. We all love you, Sue. I know that I could say a lot about the "he" you mention in your poem right now, Sweetie, but it's probably best that I don't. Just remember if you ever need to talk, my e-mail is above. With Love From Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugssssssss) Oh Sue, we are all here for you, sweet friend, I can understand how it can be so scary to be all alone and coping with pain but know you have friends and we are here to support you as we all send angel hugs your way to help you through every days trials! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I feel so bad for you, Sue... I just wish I could fly down to Oklahoma and help you out. I really liked the poem and it looks like your writing has come a very long way.... You may not be able to move your body... but your mind can certainly write poetry... I'll call you tomorrow  ~ healing hugsLyra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
(((((( Sue )))))) Hugs to you...... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, let me tell you, I went through it for three years...please don't let fear stand in the way of you having a better life...this what you write is no life at all...bust loose, run free, and never look back girlfriend! You'll be so glad if you can just break out of the shell that you're in right now. Listen to me, I know. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Hi Sue as passing shadows said bust loose run free today is the first day of the rest of your life  J...*S*... |
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