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VAS
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0 posted 2002-10-26 02:41 PM


Goin’ Standard

it’s coming
that extra hour
get to stay in bed
a little longer
start church
an hour later

so instead of waking up
‘tween 4 and 5
now I’ll wake up
‘tween 3 and 4
‘cuzn I’m on this side
of 50

ya know
the side that condenses
sleep time into
5 or 6 hours
whether ya need it
or not

but then
what good is
sleepin’ in
if you’re not awake
to know it’s
happenin’

uh, happenin’?

©October 26, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-26 06:04 PM




(sigh) Oh Virginia, sometimes I think the same thing, I know sleep as important but I feel in a way it is a waste of time as I wish there was something else sleep can offer to make it seem worth the while! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-26 09:23 PM


Virginia, this is a really cute poem. I love it. Thanks.


Love To All,
Ethel

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-10-26 09:27 PM


This is a really cute poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2002-10-26 09:30 PM


Diddo.. Thanks for reminding me
SG

Very Cute

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5 posted 2002-10-26 10:42 PM


VAS~ Since I'm working tonight, I have to work that extra hour, but next Spring will be my turn, unless I'm working days then...Paul
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