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Possessed
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Possessed I feel by some heart weak Which claims my time and thoughts so deep It takes my pen and words of ache Awakens pain, for rhyme to make The beckoning from other side The messenger who’ll speak The words flow without thinking Possessed, they make me weak But I must write each word within For the suffering, speak their sin Ease the heartache and their pain So they may rest but once again |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Rick, I understand this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, I feel it is much more dangerous to just bottle the ache inside of you but if you have the courage to let the words out and let others compassionately relate to you, it feels so much better! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rick - your writings always leave me thinking and I am drawn back to read them again. Well done. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rick - I like this writing, sad somewhat, but I liked it. Guess because I've been somewhere there... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The best poetry is the vehicle to cleanse the soul...always well done in your honor. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, this is a very good poem. I like it very much. It has a lot of truth in it. You are right...when people write about the things inside, it does help them, as well as others, too. It lets people know that others have experienced the same things they are going through. Thanks for Sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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