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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bare moon illumination, me slipping the key into your lock, standing there in my smoky grey London Fog? Remember, The one you bought for me, in the city, insisting the color brought out the blue in my green eyes? Remember, You grinning as I whirled around once, you embracing me, huskily whispering, "Yes, that's you!" Remember, You scuffed barefoot to the door, welcoming me in, taking my coat, and I stood there with nothing on? Remember, You grinning as I whirled around once, you embracing me, huskily whispering, "Yes, that's you!" I remember, too, how I loved you. Remember? . . . . . . . . . note that London Fog is a well-known kind of expensive brand name of a raincoat (I thought it was well-known) but from comments, evidently not?  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-26-2002 06:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good imagery, Pat. I could feel the fog. A nice early a.m. read! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sometimes memories seem as though it's the present. The imagery in your poem certainly brought it to life. Well done! Deb |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, this is a beautiful poem to read this early morning. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel Did you get the reply to your e-mail? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Patricia, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, a somewhat haunting beauty fills the poem behind the fog! May this true love always fill your heart, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank youn for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sunshine and Noah, I don't mean to laugh for I was trying to write a serious poem. I have since edited the poem at bottom to include fact London Fog is a rather expensive, internationally well-known raincoat. I seriously believed everyone knew that, but being from the S.F Bay Area might make a different, tho. I no longer live there, but, it rains all winter long there... Not sure how you could feel the fog, for it was a bare moon illuminating... this truly strikes me funny... I guess I had better keep trying to write in a more cognizant way....so, for what it's worth, I am not personally, nor, in this poem, ~in a fog~! I do sincerely appreciate your replies. Really I do...(big smile) Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
regards2you - now this is what I call something I could get used to. Just in London Fog, m'mmmmmm.... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Deb, Thanks for your reply. Trying to learn to write in a different form, and am glad the imagery was clear to you. Pat Bill, (sigh), these things just don't happen often enough...meaning, special moments in time.....thanks for replying. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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