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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I grasp a falling metaphor wrangling the precipice-- sound waves don't pave path to moon-- nor do my dangling of feet impress the stars below to cause a symphony of silent star-- empty ears are empty jars-- I long to fill them-- with my jazz... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow, the strains of "Uptown Girl" behind the reading of this just did not seem to match, so I had to turn the music off, and enjoy the jazz of you! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I think you already have the jazz in you, I could almost hear a celestial cover of something Glen Miller reading this, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lovesick_Proletariat Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 11 |
funkalicious poemthingie. and i dont say that to just everybody....thats a big complement....oh wait...i did say that to someone.....and someone else...so i guess its not much of an honor. or maybe it is. i like jazz. but im too white to play jazz. sometimes i wish i wasnt white...but that doesnt mean a wigger is me. i just wish i was more funky. anyway...about this poem you have given us. its.....um....delicious. i have no idea what the hell that means. have a nice day. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Wow, there is a lot of emptiness around. I am so blessed that it is not around me now. Thank you much. etoodog |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, as you already know, I love the way you write poetry. You have your own special, unique way. By the way, it's very beautiful, too, sweet lady. Thanks for sharing your "jazz" with us. I love jazz. Love, Ethel |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Serenity...This is a very well-written and beautiful poem. I love the way you dangled your words right into my heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You filled my ears, and my mouth. |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Kinda like this one, although it wasn't what I thought it was going to be. this had more of a blues feel like one of those coffee shops back in the sixties, full of smoke and feelings. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Still dancin'? Still smokin'! Play on witch! ~Ed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
can I do a quick curtsey here of "thank you?" hand over heart, from me to you...ALL (which reminds me of a story...grin...but it will have to wait, until I can type properly...--it's a chore to proof-read in double vison)  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a symphony of silent star-- empty ears are empty jars-- I long to fill them-- with my jazz... I can hear the sounds of Charlie Parker in the background, long may you continue to fill your screens and hearts with your poetic jazz. basically what I am trying to say is I like this one ALOT The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca |
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