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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-10-26 02:05 AM



Wrapped in my blue thoughts,
I feel the cozy beat
of your blue heart
pulsing out the rapturous blue
of your love-lorn voice.
The mist of your warm breath
gently caressing the last fragments
of my night, the first golden
specks of my daylight.And, I hear
the blue chords of your body
pounding out its sultry blues.
I reach across the blue veil
of time; and touch the hem
of your eternal adornments.

All the while...
wrapped in my blue thoughts
I speak the words
that wrap themselves
around your true~~~blue heart.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-26 02:33 AM


Ivy Rose, this is a beautiful poem. It seemed like I could almost hear someone playing the "blues" very softly in the background. Thanks for sharing this.


Love To All,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-26 05:17 PM






(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, such sensual colors and visions fill these words, may these blues always croon to your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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3 posted 2002-10-26 06:49 PM


I liked unwraping these thoughts because every one had meaning to me. Thank you.

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4 posted 2002-10-26 06:50 PM


This is simply lovely Ivy.  Beautiful.  
Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-10-26 07:38 PM


Ivy Rose - Nice write, bluesy kinda, but wrapped in blue thoughts...

BC

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6 posted 2002-10-26 07:48 PM


Ivy Rose - this is lovely!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-10-27 10:28 AM


This is not the least bit blue....very
shiny...simply is you...

Thanx Ivy...

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8 posted 2002-10-28 04:23 AM



Ivy Rose~
This is a lovely write.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2002-12-27 02:03 AM


whew! good...
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