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Wind Danced
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wind Danced Red leaf on thin limb awaits tug of frosty wind to join misty air. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ah, this is really terrific; I love it! Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, you are really good at these short poems. I enjoyed. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio...you just know I love this.. there is something sad about the falling leaves though.. and their final dance is conducted by the wind. If I may add.... One by one, circling down to earth, these yellow birds, these frail, falling leaves. ~Hugs Nancy Lee~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A haiku filled with just the right amount of colorful images to speak to the heart. GREAT WORK!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Tears of angel blood Glissade from forlorn branches Pattering cold grass  (big hugggssssss) This sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I know this feeling perfectly because when I was a boy the dying leaves reminded me of my own personal death and many times I thought of suicide and now while I have grown stronger, the memories still sadden me and I slowly begin to see fall as more of a test of renewed faith and vitality! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and liht always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I am such a haiku fan and this one of yours is fabulous.  I am keeping this ... Hugs on a great job of writing. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
An absolutely perfect Haiku. Lovely. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Simply sweet, a magnificent view. Thank you. etoodog |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - fourteen words, one thousand meanings. Very nicely written... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful haiku!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for your words of encouragement..I appreciate that you not only read the poem you took time to comment...that means a great deal to me...I'm slowly starting to like haikus and senyrus...thank you again... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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