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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-10-25 07:51 PM

For not these aches, so many never known escapes
By far the farthest star, to reach in sharper shapes
Curves in happy harmony bend in shadow drapes

To take these revelations and prize them all to you
To be the brightest light in me of love so very true

For not each consequence, each breaking down of fence
By far the best you are, to charm my heart of innocence
Arches bold the love I hold to shine in graceful eminence

To take these dreams cascade and treasure oh so true
To be the shimmer found in me and glimmer all of you

For not these days without, uncertain doubt far now escapes
By far the future star, in mystic fire and breathless shapes
Curves in play beneath you stay wherever moonlight drapes

To take these tears of passing years and prize them all to you
To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true

Copyright Kkh 10/25/02

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-25 07:52 PM

Yes, I love this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-10-25 08:06 PM

Oh I loved this, when you come back - does this style have a name? This was simply excellent.

Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me.
By Sy Miller/Bill Jackson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-25 08:08 PM

TD...so apt, so true,
so beautiful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-25 08:14 PM

Ah Kathleen...how I do love your unique style of writing.
Much enjoyed this beauty!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-10-25 08:48 PM

To take these dreams cascade and treasure oh so true
To be the shimmer found in me and glimmer all of you

beautiful lines, K

M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-25 09:42 PM

(smiles) And may that futire star descend and light for you true loves inevitable sign, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I love the romance of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-25-2002 09:43 PM).]

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2002-10-25 09:45 PM

Bravo!!!!

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-25 09:53 PM

Kathleen, this is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you write.

Love To All,
Ethel

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2002-10-25 11:11 PM

I can only type softly:

This is an absolutely exquisite poem of love.

Thank you so very much for sharing it with us. It is a joy to read!

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-10-26 12:24 PM

I wish it had been longer.

This was great!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-10-26 01:23 AM

You sparkle sooooo nice Diamond Lady~

I never wanted this to end!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-10-26 01:41 AM

Beautiful beyond words!!! So intricately penned..with many nuances and pearls of swirling passion. ***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-10-26 02:20 AM

just beautiful! I love this story, thanks for sharing.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2002-10-26 03:22 PM

ThisDiamond - very nice. It must be a good feeling to have someone write about another close...

BC

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

15 posted 2002-10-26 08:41 PM

"To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true" How you are able to recognize these diamonds in your writings are beyound me. I am happy to read some of them. Thank you.

etoodog

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

16 posted 2002-10-26 08:55 PM

Beautiful..

SimplyGold

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

17 posted 2002-10-26 09:13 PM

You all grace me with such uplifting support, and I humbly thank you all.
ThisDiamond

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

18 posted 2002-10-26 10:54 PM

To take these tears of passing years and prize them all to you
To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true

This is so beautiful, Kathy, although it speaks of deep heartbreak

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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