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Genuine_Canadian_Man
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Timmins, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-10-25 07:01 PM


HAPPINESS

A lifetime
of dreams
and promises.
First love.
Glory.
My heart yells,
"Alleluia!"


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-10-25 07:09 PM



A man of few words, but so well said!

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-25 07:12 PM


Beautifully written and said

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-25 07:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, and we wish Hallejuah to a life of happiness ahead of you forever and ever! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-10-25 07:36 PM


...So much said in so few words...
Well done!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-10-25 07:50 PM


Hi there welcome to PiP’s this is beautiful brief and telling I love this it is superb writing. Keep up the good work, PiP’s is always pleased to welcome writers of talent, it looks like you’ll fit right at home


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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6 posted 2002-10-25 08:08 PM


I would say this poem is a sign of a very happy Genuine Canadian Man.

    
Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me.
By Sy Miller/Bill Jackson

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2002-10-25 08:18 PM


so what makes you so genuine

just kidding..
M

regards2you
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8 posted 2002-10-25 08:27 PM


Wow! It makes me feel happy reading it. Welcome to Passions. Look forward to reading more of your poems.


Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2002-10-25 11:07 PM


WELCOME  to Passions. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more. Thanks for sharing.


Love to All,
Ethel

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