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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-10-25 06:30 PM

Some Say
An Ode To ‘Deer

Some say the stars don’t shine so bright
They cannot see their stunning light
Some others won’t look in their soul
They are shallow and not quite whole
But within the world there are a few
Who realise that beauty grows anew
They see the words that you let fall
Then follow when they hear you call

Some say that beauty can’t be truly real
They live in shadows and cannot feel
Then to take a chance is much too much
They hide their souls from friendships touch
But somewhere inside everyone
The chance lives for the hope of sun
In reading you they see that hope is true
Then admit to themselves what hope can do

Some say that dreams can’t be true
They fear the barriers they can’t break through
And lose their souls in the dark and drear
Keeping to the path out of pain and fear
But even when the sun seems too dim
There is hope that it will come within
In breathing in your words of loving grace
They find their way back to the human race

Some say the words they have been taught
But you show them what their hearts have sought

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Genuine_Canadian_Man
Junior Member

since 2002-10-07

Posts 11
Timmins, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-10-25 06:55 PM

What a truly inspiring poem. It opens up so many doors of hope and passion for me.

Keep on writting and good luck in your future!

Take Care!
Genuine_Canadian_Man

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-25 07:10 PM

This is so sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-10-25 08:16 PM

I am hoping all the time...not sure if it helps but it can't hurt *s

hugss Mushy one
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-25 09:19 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous dedication to a wonderful man, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Balladeer is truly the master storyteller just as your words tell speak with such clarity, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-10-25 09:34 PM

Marsha,
Your poem is wonderful you are a writers delight. And I'm sure he is all of this light.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-25 09:41 PM

Marsha, this is beautiful. I know that Balladeer will love it. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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