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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-25 01:52 PM


Tender Heart


your fingerprints
are on my dreams
taking my reality
to deeper extremes
in daylight my bones
have such an ache
a yearning a heart
can hardly take
a feeling so weak
and so strong
then your breath
becomes my night’s song
your treasured devotion
the clothes I wear
I am ready tender heart
come take me there


I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-25 01:55 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-25 05:23 PM


Helen, this was absolutely beautiful. thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-10-25 05:25 PM


Lesssee....South La.....should be there in about....5.5 hours?...Okay?
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4 posted 2002-10-25 05:40 PM


Absolutamundo!
Wow!

Robert Adamson
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5 posted 2002-10-25 07:39 PM


I see a tender heart. Thank you.

etoodog

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-10-25 10:00 PM


helen - more than lovely...

BC

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7 posted 2002-10-25 10:02 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, may loves heart always come take you away to the heavens where your dreams are tucked under blankets! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thanbk you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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