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*Stubby*
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0 posted 2002-10-25 01:13 PM



Just For You

The day will come we will be as one
That day I hope come true
For on that daywill no longer bring
Just smiles with thoughts of you

Few have come and all have gone
All have gone but you
You'll no longer be just a new found freind
For myheart I'll give to you

Though from times gone by
No more I wished to try
And lonely will I be
Then came you and said no more
In pain no more be free

You've warmed my heart
Changed my mind
And joy of life returned
So this I say and say only to you
For you I'll always be true

J xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
Always and Forever



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-25 01:26 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-10-25 01:31 PM


Wonderfully written! Bravo!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-25 01:38 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you and I wish this loves joy to always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stubby, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-25 01:44 PM


Stubby, if you've read any of my poems about mine and my Gary's feelings for each other, you know how I love these romantic poems. This one is so heartfelt, friend. I loved it. thanks for sharing your heart with us.


Love To All,
Ethel

P.S. I love the little graphics, too. I just don't know how to use them, yet.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-25 02:28 PM


Hi J!  What a warm and hearfelt write this is!
Beautiful romantic verse...
Much enjoyed the sentiments here today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Toerag
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6 posted 2002-10-25 05:30 PM


this is a very good use of words...I really liked the thought...(I say those same things to myself in the mirror every morning...and, I am the only one left for me...)
scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2002-10-25 05:41 PM


Strong expressive write...this should melt hearts here in pip...

...believe what your heart feels...

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